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Treatment: And here we go agen :P

Treatment by Kitty Toft

Elizient

Treatment

24.01.2014

Amanda, 14, looks hard at the outlet. It’s another spark. She gets closer whiteout being able to stop. Her hand stretches closer. A spark fly’s out from the wall and grabs her hand. It drags her into the socket. Amanda panics, she starts to change, the room looking smaller when she gets dragged in to the outlet.

She fly’s true a white light tunnel with such speed, all she notices is the wire on the ground and the lack of lamps, and it’s light. She stops when she comes to a strange city with creatures that are glowing all around her.

It’s a boy behind her. He’s about her age. He shows her the city Elizient, the city of the light, and that they are the helpers of the town. They bring the power to the outlet so that the people can get electricity. In return they have a worm town and a bright city.

He shows her the work station she will be working at, it’s the outdoor socket. She starts to work with the socket. The change of time can be seen in her new bright glow.

Without warning it gets all black. Her hand is hit with a spark from the outdoor socket. She tries to find the light switch, but can’t find any. She runs around. Panic takes her. It’s all dark.

She grabs around her chest protecting while she scream all she can she closes her eyes in panic.

She can hear someone saying her name and someone shaking her shoulders. She opens her eyes, the room is so bright, over her is the boy is there looking down at her with worry. She smiles, it’s all good now.

 

Treatment 2 by Kitty Toft

Treatment by Kitty Toft

Elizient

Treatment

29.12.2013

Amanda, 14, looks hard at the outlet. It’s another spark. She gets closer whiteout being able to stop. Her hand stretches closer. A spark fly’s out from the wall and grabs her hand. It drags her into the socket. Amanda panics, she starts to change, the room looking smaller when she gets dragged in to the outlet.

She fly’s true a white light tunnel with such speed, all she notices is the wire on the ground and the lack of lamps, even know its light. She stops when she comes to a strange city with creatures that are glowing all around her.

It’s a boy behind her. He’s about her age. He shows her the city Elizient, the city of the light, and that they are the helpers of the town. They bring the power to the outlet so that the people can get electricity. In return they have a worm town and a bright city.

He shows her the work station she will be working at, it’s the outdoor socket. She starts to work with the socket. The change of time can be seen in her new glow.

Without warning it gets all black. She tries to find the light switch, but can’t find any. She runs around. Panic takes her.

She grabs around her chest protecting while she scream all she can.

She can hear someone saying her name and someone shaking her shoulders. She opens her eyes, the light is on, and her mum is shaking her awake.

 

Treatment By Kitty Toft

Elizient

Treatment

29.12.2013

While looking at the wall Jack, 14, looks hard at the outlet. And he sees it again, it’s a spark. He gets closer. He can’t stop himself from stretching his hand closer. Before he knows it the spark fly’s out of the wall and stretches for his hand. It catches him and drags him towards the wall. Jack panics he starts to change, the room looking smaller when he gets dragged in to the outlet.

He looks at the strange walls while he fly’s true the tunnels, it looks like white walls with wire ground. The speed is so fast. It is no lamps, but its light, he can see everything. Before he knows it he’s in a big strange space, there so many strange creatures there, and they are all looking like they all are glowing.

Someone pokes him in the back, it’s a short strange looking girl that are glowing. She’s about his age. She explains that he now is a part of the Elizient, the city of the light, and that they are the helpers of the town. They bring the power to the outlet so that the people can get electricity. In return they have a worm town and a bright city.

He gets a bit afraid, but after some comforting she starts showing his around in the town. He will be the charger of the outlet outside. The girl lets him know that the longer you work, the more energy you can make. And outside there is not that much they use electricity for.

It don’t take him long to get the hold on how to make the electricity go true the socket and he likes his new world. He likes it so much that the time fly’s away and before he know it he’s been there for something that felt like years.

His getting better at the lighting up parts, but still has a long way for making the same amount of light as the one been there longer. But with some time he knows he will do it well. All he has to do is focus and practice.

While in his own mind the girl who took him in and shows him around that day comes to him so fast, she looks so panicked. He all most gets scared just by looking at her. She hurry’s up and tells him that she worked with the lighting in the house when she herd on the phone that there is coming so much rain, that the family is getting pumps outside to remove all the water in the yard.

They are putting the pumps all around the house to pump away the rain. She needs to get more of them there. She fly’s true the corridor to look for help. They need to get everyone here and that fast.

He sees the light of everyone coming to help. But it gets so bright. He’s having a hard time holding his eyes open. When he manages to open his eyes, it’s a doctor there, lighting him in the eyes.

He explains that there’s been an accident when he came to close to electricity in the garage of his father. But everything’s okay now and his parents will be there in a minute.

 
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thinking ways for my treatment..

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I like 20111123_StoryCinema_P5_Janne_Sëlen_Teigland_FP01 she have the same way to Write her treatment as i do.

 

Filmproducsjon – treatment – ideas

ideas for 1 houer

Ferry flying in children room

A plain going wild in the air.

Flower losing its leafs.

Monkey running around at a cercus.

A bee diving in the sea.

The lonely shoe, who felt so sad.

The evil tooth brush that came alive when no one were around.

The living phone that went evil.

The ant building a home.

The butterfly searching for colors.

Snake on the run from jail.

The life of electricity, they walk and changing phones. The world and carding shocks. Its really a world of secrets.

The gum factory.

The love virus spreading around town.

The troll of the mountain.

The tattoo who was alive.

If color wood change with your mod.

A dwarf making cupcakes.

The star who fell into the mountains.